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TwiLuna by illuminatiums TwiLuna by illuminatiums
I guess that walking on clouds spell has some use after all :3
Which skies shall I choose, canon stile or my stile? decisions decisions.

A bit more canon stile: [link]
Alpha channel: [link]
Moonless version plus PSD download

Gotta do more Luna cos shes the best pony <3
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Once again, we're here to do a small critique about Junglepony's work!
Anyway let's begin!

Vision:
I find the pose of the characters quite nice. The two ponies, Princess Luna and Twilight Sparkle, are caught in the middle on a tender kiss under the moonlight. It is a really nice pair to ship! The socks they both wear are a additional touch to the saucy scene.

Originality:
I'd say there is not much TwilightXLuna pics, so it's really original. Twilight Sparkle was one of the only ponies to stay awake at night to admire the stars, which make her quite a good one to have Luna's favors... Despite the fact that your name is associated with kinky ponies, you once again found a way to ship ponies in an original way.

Technique:
Like I said in another critique, your style is that great that it looks really like it was taken straight from the show. The character design is almost the same as in the official MLP TV show. The eyebrows, the colors, the shades are exactly what we could expect from an expert artist!
Special mention for Luna's mane, made of stars and a night-sky. It's the only thing slightly different from the show, but far much better this way. Even for the cloud, we could almost feel it's softness under their hooves.

Impact:
Once again, the emotional impact is really strong here. While the other pics were more about pure "kinkyness", I find this one more about expressing long-time hidden emotions. They were forced to hide their feelings, as nopony would accept it... The only way they had to meet was at night, on a remote cloud, quite romantic I think

That's all for that critique, hope you'll find it fair! If not... Sorry for having you read this!
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Critique by ~pokemaster2185 22 minutes ago
This pic almost seems like it could be a continuation of the previous Twiluna pic. They've taken up residence on their own little cloud in the middle of the night for some nice loving alone-time.

Between the pose and the kiss, this does an amazing job conveying the passion between Twilight and Luna. The position of Luna's left foreleg makes it seem like she's getting ready to take things further than just kissing. The way Twilight's tail is positioned and how messy her hair is implies that she was pushed down suddenly. The stockings as always make them adorable, and I see Twilight is indeed wearing the same panties as in your previous pic. Looks like Luna appreciated Twilight's gesture.

Nice little nod with remembering the cloud-walking spell from Sonic Rainboom. It would have been a bit of a complaint until I remembered that, and that you mentioned it in the pic description.
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:iconafaq2002afaq:
afaq2002afaq Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
wooooooowwww
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:iconcatisawesome123:
catisawesome123 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015  Student Digital Artist
and this becomes the birth of one of my adopts.
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:iconjungledyret-2000:
JungleDyret-2000 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
Cute =D
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:iconsweet-karem:
Sweet-karem Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I love such couple pics of mare and mare. Heart
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:iconilluminatiums:
illuminatiums Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
And look at you! You look perfect for my next plan ;)
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:iconsweet-karem:
Sweet-karem Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
oh..and which will be a surprise
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:iconchristianbethel:
ChristianBethel Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:O
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:iconsnowdrop1985:
Snowdrop1985 Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love such couple pics of mare and mare. :heart:
And if it's that well drawn as yours, then it's simply perfect. :love: (\s/)
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:icondolphinfox:
DolphinFox Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's so cool painted, I did not even perceive the overall essence of this art!
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:iconwillfindyouandhugyou:
For Realz son
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:iconilluminatiums:
illuminatiums Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, they maken love!
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:iconwillfindyouandhugyou:
willfindyouandhugyou Featured By Owner May 8, 2014
No shit, sounds legit.

lol
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:iconruaken:
Ruaken Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014
Burrrrr shipping whatever. Very well done, to be sure.
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:iconhalorecons12:
HaloRecons12 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Professional Filmographer
The Moon and the Stars are the only two common things that appear in the night sky.   Don't ask how I came up with that, lol.  Nice work, though.
 
- Revy
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:iconthearticfox:
TheArticFox Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
Luna?..L-Luna, wat r u doin?LUNA STAHP
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:iconsuffering1990:
suffering1990 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
:iconholycrapwrightplz::iconsaysplz: HOLLY MOTHER OF HELL!!!
:iconedgeygahplz::iconsaysplz: NO WAY!!!
:iconobjection1plz::iconobjection2plz::iconobjection3plz:
:iconobjection4plz::iconobjection5plz::iconobjection6plz: X2
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:iconhalorecons12:
HaloRecons12 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Professional Filmographer
lmfao
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:icongothguru:
GothGuru Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
Twilight spending quality time with her great, great, great, grand ma. :D
Beautiful artwork.
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:iconmusicpony882:
MusicPony882 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
no. no. no. luna is better then this.
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:iconprototype223:
PROTOTYPE223 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013
Now I wish I was Twilight in that picture
Wat, making out with Luna (if I was a stallion) would be awesome
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:iconmanithmagesinger:
ManithMagesinger Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2013
A friend of mine sent me this pic, and I fell in love, this is the pic that got me interested in your art, and I personally love the whole stockings thing, im so glad it's kind of the theme of your art, just fantastic, keep up the good work.
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:iconprototype223:
PROTOTYPE223 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
if u are fapping or clopping or whatever the hell u call it: YOU WILL DIE!
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:iconk---h:
K---h Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
Yeah, Rule 34 is for that.
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:iconprototype223:
PROTOTYPE223 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013
 you do not sat
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:iconderpyfun0:
Derpyfun0 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
gay
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:iconprototype223:
PROTOTYPE223 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
lesbian to be exact
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:iconderpyfun0:
Derpyfun0 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
ol ok
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:iconprototype223:
PROTOTYPE223 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013
now u get the idea, lesbian is 2 women and gay is men
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:iconderpyfun0:
Derpyfun0 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013
:| (Blank Stare)
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:iconprototype223:
PROTOTYPE223 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013
rly
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:iconderpyfun0:
Derpyfun0 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013
yh
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:iconcartoonfreak666:
CartoonFreak666 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student Artist
Very, very Sexy
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:iconl1k3r:
L1K3R Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
So sexy :3
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:iconbeauty-bunny:
Beauty-Bunny Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Professional Artist
MMMMM horse pussy
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:iconk---h:
K---h Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
That's a bit far. This isn't officially porn, so don't act like it is.
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:iconbeauty-bunny:
Beauty-Bunny Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Professional Artist
Still fuck em.
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:iconprincessvanina:
princessvanina Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
luna es pedofila
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:icondrakenhof:
Drakenhof Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
Pese a que hay una considerable diferencia de edad entre ambas (mil años por lo menos), Twilight es una pony adulta, así que no es pedofilia
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:iconbeauty-bunny:
Beauty-Bunny Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Professional Artist
Luna is not a fucking pedophile.
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:iconprototype223:
PROTOTYPE223 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Celestia is, well a molester :iconmolestiaplz:
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:icontheponymuseum:
ThePonyMuseum Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Used as part of my custom desktop background [link]
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:iconrainbowroyal:
RainbowRoyal Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Student Photographer
O.O
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:iconace-express:
Ace-Express Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
Hey are they on a cloud?
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:iconilluminatiums:
illuminatiums Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes
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:iconparamorefreak86:
ParamoreFreak86 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
woooow
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:iconafromatrix007:
AfroMatrix007 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
I like this particular picture, I like it a lot.
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:iconmeowmeowzz123:
meowmeowzz123 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
why are dey wearing legwarmers?
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:iconprototype223:
PROTOTYPE223 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013
socks
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:iconspectreid:
spectreid Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013
is there a version with a higher resolution available?
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:iconilluminatiums:
illuminatiums Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
If you like I can upload high resolution, but you wouldn't gain anything from it unless you want crop something for something
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